Totally agreeing with you; the last line is the only quibble I have with the piece overall - but I understand it from the perspective of the time this was written.
BTW - check out the updated post with femke's suggestion of "The Female of the Species". *wink*
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Date: 2011-06-22 08:39 pm (UTC)BTW - check out the updated post with femke's suggestion of "The Female of the Species". *wink*